Delirium

Too much to lose

With not enough time

To gain

What's rightfully important

Is sanity's profane & grave influences

Will push the envelope

For what needs to be

Commencing imaginatively

Reality displays psychotherapy

As The elements

Of a mental disturbance

Truly matter

Within the cellar

Of a inner minds corridor

Is gravity's wane grip

On psychic deviancy

Heard loudly & subconsciously

Is the turning

Of a psychological doorknob

Opening a mental squeaking door

Labeled

Beware Of A Unseen Disturbed Forum

Within a psychical realm

Called Delirium

Author's Note

I'm experimenting with a creatively unique & intriguing theme. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

this one had a dark and haunting vibe of insanity that i really enjoyed! these lines particularly caught my eye:
"As The elements
Of a mental disturbance
Truly matter
Within the cellar
Of a inner minds corridor"

being someone who deals with mental disorder, i found that to be a description that hit home. great work!

[Krista Weiss]

Oh my gosh! Knew I would love this just because of the name! Just read the Delirium trilogy and they were the best books everrr! < 3 Anyways haha! It was really great!! Amazing job! :)

[RainDancer1997]

It seems like your having fun experimenting:) Good job:)!

[Rita L. Sev]

A lot to ponder here... is being "crazy" really insane - or just not conforming to the norms?

Of a inner minds corridor = *an/mind's

[Pryde Foltz]

Or is being crazy simply another reality? Really liked this piece.

[David Scott]

Beware indeed.
Promises usually have a catch. The bigger the promise the greater the price... Usually. Hmmmm I wonder. Maybe it will be different here. Delirium could be deliriously happy or simple deliriously crazy. Either way, out of control.
Oh you have me thinking.