Paving Your Own Road & Watching It Blossom As Time Unfolds

Can you picture yourself

Along a main road

You've personally constructed

As time unfolds

The grass can become greener

If your demeanor & new streets name

Suits the purpose

Of a meaningful dream

While cashing in on your ambitions

It seems befitting

To the naked eye

What constitutes a living paradise

Within each different & distinctive living mind

Lies a destined yearning for

Paving Your Own Road & Watching It Blossom As Time Unfolds

Author's Note

The creative experimentation is still going on with me. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Dez H.]

Bpoet slash Gudda B good s**t homey. I like the part about reaching the living paradise part. God knows i need it. Once again you never fail to verbally manifest some artwork for the mind.

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i love the line about the living paradise. Something about it just kinda hits me, but anyway, this was great :D

[DJ]

Thought provoking read my friend. Nice use of imagery, a good read :)

[K. Louis]

There's power in creating your own road...well done.

[SyberRose]

Enjoyed Brian...my sons name too....nicely done...Rose

[shallimarRose]

Brian this title and the repeated at the ending made this whole poem for me.. Thought provoking piece.. Great message.. One mans description of paradise may not be the next.. Well done.. xo Rose

[Krista Weiss]

Really great poem! Love this! :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Wisdom and strength expressed here - nice, BP!

[prachi prangya agasti]

nice.. and well written... pleased to read this...

[Pryde Foltz]

Can you picture yourself
Along a main road
You've personally constructed
As time unfolds

Nice.