Ravenously Blood Thirsty (Part 3)

Ravenously Blood Thirsty (Part 3)

A Poem by B-poet

As the howling moon

Showcased a final showdown

Between the lead vampire & werewolf

A blood thirsty pack

No longer existed

Between both camps

As a last dance

For who'll reign

Over a dawning supremacy

 

Will never cease

As the emerging winner

Will become

A Lord Bearer

After this climatic battle

Officially ends

 

Advancing the victor

Towards immortality

As a hidden shadowy ceremony

Commences during the night & The Crowned Lord Bearer 

Has lead & acquired

A newly formed breed of vampires

With vicious & nocturnal canine teeth

In the final part

Of Ravenously Blood Thirsty

© 2013 B-poet


Author's Note

B-poet
Putting so touches on this part of Ravenously Blood Thirsty Parts. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy.

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Ok is this a story that you are finishing up?? "Ravenously Blood Thirsty Parts"?
This was a little vampire-ish with a hint of end of the world in it maybe?
I like the form Bri... thank you for the rr.. xo Rose


Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting piece, my friend. Normally I'm not really into the whole "vampire/werewolf" thing, but this was done very well! I like the references in the last stanza that harken back to days of old. There is a very classical feel to this one for some reason, and it has a lot to say and does it well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really cool poem! Great job!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


So hybrids:)! I loved this! Very different and yet amazing! Great job:)!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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B-poet

Indianapolis, IN



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