Life Is Such A Candid Dream

It's such a mesmerizing feature

As the curtain pulls

With a vast audience of believers

Looking to be apart of

An interesting & intriguing stage set

Fueling the allure

For what life begets

In a heartbeat

Seconds & minutes

Forsake a humanistic time period

Influencing, Germinating & Giving

Birth to numerous possibilities

Waiting to be indulged into existence

Whether happy or dreary

The feeling of what could be

Is demonstrative enough

For every human being to see that

Life Is Such A Candid Dream

Author's Note

I'm still feeling the profound & thought provoking buzz. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[audrie]

This reminds me of falling asleep - I so look forward to dreams - awesome depiction of the the desire ofpeop
wanting to be entertained

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

theres a small grammatical thing in the 5th line where you say A instead of An, but otherwise this is a lovely piece. Again, two thumbs up :D

[Destinyxi]

A interesting & intriguing stage set --- A should be An

Great poem. I love the imagery used.

[Liz]

I can only imagine the thoughts that stemmed your inspiration for this piece of work.
The flow of the poem is nice, as though it is slowly creeping up on you before ending, "Life Is Such A Candid Dream". Nice write.

[Dana Alsamsam]

life is an ebb and flow of good and bad, but every candid shot is imperfect. love the title because it most definitely is candid- we never know what will come to us next.

[Frieda P]

Indeed it is, good, bad or indifferent, you don't know what tomorrow will bring, yet in our dreamlike state we can have it all.

Forsake a humanistic time period
Influencing, Germinating & Giving

Unique look at that time our bodies are in animated suspension. Excellent read!

[shallimarRose]

"Fueling the allure
For what life begets
In a heartbeat"

Enjoyed this Bri.. you're in contemplation this week it would seem.. xo rose

[MsJewel]

I found this to be quite optimistic and uplifting - perhaps a little dreamy as well. Always a pleasure to read your work. :) Julie

[NA]

most enjoyable, thought provoking read :) x

[prachi prangya agasti]

great lines... wonderfully written...