Two Loving Doves

They're peaceful symbols

Delicate

Like ivory rose petals

Existing only to preserve

Life's defining true endeavor

Happiness & Humility

Held in each hand

Meant to be extended

As a loving gesture

For all eyes to see

Feathered Divinity

Remains to be

A stepping stone

Fulfilling unwavering peace

Within the souls of troubled hearts & dreams

As they were lifted

To spread their wings

They flew away

Reminding us as human beings

To live graciously

One can only appreciate

This honorary scene from above

Flying in the clouds

Were Two Loving Doves

Together happily ever after

Depicting a harmonious union

Is always possible with God's intervention

Author's Note

Still trying out new themes. I wanted to lean towards a thoughtfully provoking write. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

Happiness & Humility

Held in each hand

Meant to be extended

As a loving gesture

For all eyes to see

fantabulous imagery :) loved it
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[AleyshaRosa]

Honestly, the dove is my favourite bird, simply for it's innocent fragility. You captured both the emotion and imagery, and I really appreciate how well you did it.

Very good

Koodoos

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

great job! very easy and pleasant to read :D

[MsJewel]

Beautifully soft and uplifting. I emjoyed reading this very much. :) Julie

[Dana Alsamsam]

i like how you've experimented with breaking up this piece into stanzas, it really works and makes this piece easy to read. the undertone of religion is very interesting in this uplifting write.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Really like the form of this one, also the imagery and the romance. You are pushing your boundaries in terms of style and content, and I like that.

This honorary scene from above
Flying in the clouds
Were two loving doves -- beautiful idea. Mating for life...

[Rita L. Sev]

A bit of romance here - very nice, BP.

[SyberRose]

Beautiful tribute to marriage and sharing a life together...Rose:)

[Emerald Seas]

This is very soft and sweet. I think it would be a nice reading at a wedding. Well done.

[Frieda P]

Another enlightening tale from your pen with a grand message. Very lovely inspirations flow from your poetry lately, thanks Bpoet.