Winning The Illustrious Ambition Derby (Jockey Version)

I must seize the triple crown

While riding on my horse's

Winning streak

His name is Maintaining Meaningful Wishes

Yet you now know me

As Daring Jockey

You've heard of us

Both lately

As the betting participants

Cheer us on to win

Before cashing in

Yet we're both

A million to one favorite's

Craving more press & attention

Towards being

Daringly Befitting

 

Is the perfect fitting nickname

For us

Once we pass

Through the winning tape

By making it

Into the history books clearly

After Winning The Illustrious Ambition Derby

Author's Note

Just a follow to the original version. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

OK I didnt get the memo Brian.... Don't know what the original version was and wondering do you really follow the horse races... lol

See what you did? Ill have to go poem hunting now.. lol

xo Rose

[Rita L. Sev]

A different perspective - I like it. Both need to be read to appreciate the whole picture.

[Pryde Foltz]

The jockey version is much different. I find myself more accepting of his ambition. Strange.