Getting Lost Within The Gaze Of Your Lover's Eyes (Original - Version 2)

It's an enchanting

Display of devotion

Seen through love's

Gripping hold on

Your loving emotional state

As the sight

Of your lover's eyes

Perpetuates what its like

To feel desired & truly treasured

 

In a sense

Where time momentarily stops

And coupled sensuality

Will only last for a brief eternity

As two infatuated heartbeats

Are heard alike

 

After riding a passionate merry-go-around

Of a loving chemistry

Sparking an alluring sentiment

For what it genuinely feels like

To be unconditionally loved after

Getting Lost Within The Gaze Of Your Lover's Eyes

Author's Note

A second version of the original. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[audrie]

Where time momentarily stops
And coupled sensuality
Will only last for a brief eternity

very nice and also

After riding a passionate merry-go-around
Of a loving chemistry
Sparking an alluring sentiment
For what it genuinely feels like
To be unconditionally loved after
Getting Lost Within The Gaze Of Your Lover's Eyes

I just love the metaphors

[Lydia Shutter]

When you see love in someone else's eyes, you know it is real. That is a look that can not be duplicated or faked. The sensuality of a look can say so much. Romance can be a merry go round, no doubt about it, but when the love is there in the eyes, well, you have chosen the right horse on the merry go round! :) Good write. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

My favorite, the eyes, the first thing I notice, you can tell so much from a person's gaze....the eyes never lie, they are definitely windows to the soul and alluring when it comes to your lover's eyes....enjoyed Bpoet...

[SyberRose]

Nicely done BP...yes the eyes have it...especially when you can read desire within them...and even better when that leads to unconditional love...Rose