Blinded Faith

Looking down

While crossing

A tight rope of personal treachery

Impedes bravery

Bounded by life's

Tug of war

Gravity compliance

Shapes the present world

As an equalizer for

Spiritual balance

In need of a tested

Blinded Faith

Author's Note

Just a short, quick and profound write I came up with. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Nix]

An interesting and thought provoking piece. Well written all around.

[Clara]

I liked this a lot. My favourite lines were:

A tight rope of personal treachery
Impedes bravery
Bounded by life's
Tug of war

Well penned, my friend.

[kublakhan27]

The hardest balance of all to achieve...a concise and thought-provoking piece :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Faith is strongest when tested. Profound, indeed.

[Frieda P]

Being blind on that tightrope is certainly a test of faith, we're always being tested and usually by our own inadequacies.... Nicely pen'd.

[Pryde Foltz]

Gravity compliance
Shapes the present world
As an equalizer for
Aforementioned spiritual balance
In need of a tested
Blinded Faith

You play on the idea of gravity as caregiver quite well. Your gravity being of the more gentle sort. Awesome.

[SyberRose]

We are always being tested in some way aren't we? Nicely done BP..:)