An Unwavering Rest Is Now At Hand

Now and never before

We're all

Resting until

The early dawn's call

Uplifts our conscious potential

Into a daily realm

 

Were weariness

Is at the helm

Of a realization

Branding trendiness

As a spell of consumption

 

Pushing everyone

Into believing

An Unwavering Rest Is Now At Hand

After it commenced

Sooner than ever before

 

Leaving very few witnesses

To testify

Why this truth

Had to unfold

In real time

Author's Note

An experimental theme. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write about life, I like this part:
"Were weariness
Is at the helm
Of a realization
Branding trendiness
As a spell of consumption"

[Lydia Shutter]

When life delivers you more than you can handle, it is time to sit back and examine the facts. Once they are deciphered, it is time to move forward. Conspicuous consumption seems to be the order of the day, but those who realize "toys" are not the important part of life and the ones who will be the victors in the end. Your poetry is philosophical and carries a wise message. Lydi**

[David Scott]

Prophetic...
Yes, there will always only be a few to witnesses the greatest truths in life. The masses will never know.
Impressive thought process here.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

There is a heavy cloud lingering over your words... for I felt the exhaustion of keeping up with trends of life...
Sometimes you are forced into rest, when life becomes overwhelming...

Well penned experiment, my dear BPoet!~xoxo~:)

[kublakhan27]

This has the feeling of one of those days when you wake up and just feel like it's not gonna be your day...I have a lot of these days so I guess it's natural to interpret it that way haha...I thought the first stanza was very deep and profound...all in all, great work B :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

As for an experimental write...you convey a bit of mystery in the lines...I believe that's what you want out of this one...the vagueness of the write draws you as a reader to questions...as your last line give us that expression:

Why this truth
Had to unfold
In real time

[Traci]

For an experimental theme I'd say you did quite well my friend. Nicely penned BP.

[Cody Williams]

I definitely did enjoy! Really good write! Thanks for sharing!

-CW