Cosmic Infatuation (A Robbie & Bpoet Collaboration)

An unexplored terrain...

A maelstrom of energy

Infused by infinite light,

Vibrant kaleidoscopes dancing

As their silhouettes fervently collide...

A portal harboring truth

Illuminating serenity in their cosmos,

Revealing their secrets...

In the realm of dreams

On a cloud the goddess sleep's;

Imagination parallels reality,

Embracing the spectrum of another universe...

It's name is transverse

With elements of a veering kingdom

Where a crowned cosmic king

Will emerge

After a dazzling kiss

Commences with his queen

To be

Delegating a commanding spectrum

As they both weather

Their own galaxy devotion of loving storms

He then brings forth

His lips as a kissing septor

Marking inevitable change

As their amorous constellations

Shed light upon

The darkness of a secret

Deeply rooted

Within the heart

Of his treasured Goddess

Held above the clouds

As they're forever bonded

By an enchanting

Devoted source

Never virtually known

By mankind as a whole

Author's Note

Bpoet's stanza's are italicized, Robbie's are not. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Wow, this is incredibly beautiful!! Robbie has become one of my favorite poets at the Cafe recently, but the two of you writing together has created some magic!

There are really fantastic images and themes here, in particular "A maelstrom of energy/infused by infinite light," "Their own galaxy devotion of loving storms," and "their amorous constellations." Truly gorgeous creation - I admire your work.

[Dez H.]

Now that is some deep s**t. I like that. its the product of when two worlds collide. Good s**t and kudos to both of you.

007

[AleyshaRosa]

I enjoyed how the theme is the same, but the different perspectives make the poem more interesting and intriguing.
I love the visual of a universal king and his queen ruling all the obedient stars in the deep of space.
Fantastic

Koodoos

[MsJewel]

This was even better the second time around. Absolutely stunning :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Thank you so much Julie! XX :)

[Clara]

I loved the words used in this write.
Well-penned, friends.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

We thank you for your kind words, Lola. :)

[Cody Williams]

Great write! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Thank you Cody! :)

[SyberRose]

Beautifully and skillfully penned...painting your passions with hues of wonder. Excellent writing...Rose:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Thank you so much Rose... we greatly appreciate your sweet words. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's been a pleasure Collaborating with you B!... you are such a magnificent writer...
It's a an honor...

Thank you for taking your silky threads and weaving something heavenly within my words...
You are a divine soul and a lovely writer.. (((hugs)))~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

Gorgeous imagery a brillant collaboration. Your words weave together beautifully. A stunning poem. :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Thank you Jewel! :)

[kublakhan27]

Speechless...I would never have thought of you two as collaborators but this is brilliant...awesome work guys :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Thanks Steve... B is a genius! :)

[kublakhan27]

That makes two of you :)