An Ideal Trailer For Your Destined Future

It's the best preview

Anyone would’ve

Ever dreamt of seeing

It's you

Five years from now

In a revealing sense

Of the words

Personal change

Enjoying a higher plateau

Befitting to engage upon

As this 15 second

Commercial spot ends

With a twist

On a desired fate

Rated five stars & beyond

Is a peculiar screening

For what will be

An Ideal Trailer For Your Destined Future

Author's Note

Just being creative here. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Cody Williams]

Another great one Brian! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[SyberRose]

Wow and ditto to you too Brian...enjoyed...very creative...Rose

[kublakhan27]

Very cool and original metaphor, with a deep emotional message...really like this one :)

[MsJewel]

Wonderfully uplifting! Great creativity here.
Love it!
:) Julie

[Pryde Foltz]

You're da bomb, Bpoet. You just filled me with so much positive energy. Thank you, friend.