The Sight Of A Loving Presence (Senryu)

A warming embrace

Caressing the bewildered

In spite of danger

Author's Note

Giving a creative senryu one good experiemental try. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[MsJewel]

These little senryu's can be so difficult to do and yours is fabulous. Love it!

:) Julie

[Cody Williams]

I like it! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

There will always be some one, willing to bravely go the extra mile
To embrace and warm a ailing heart..

Well done ... Jazz

[kublakhan27]

I like bewildered, good word choice there...nicely done :)

[Rita L. Sev]

This puts me in mind of those who do missionary work, comforting people who are too stunned to help themselves, without regard to their own safety. These three lines tell a story, BP!

[SyberRose]

Nicely done Brian...enjoyed...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Creative Senryu B...bewildered or not, it's always a nice gesture.

[Pryde Foltz]

The bewildered do need the comfort. Nice one.

[Sheila Kline]

And this is a warming embrace certainly needed, and brave of the one to give comfort!