Life Is A Roller Coaster Of Compromises

Life Is A Roller Coaster Of Compromises

A Poem by B-poet

Risk-takers love the anticipation

As their riding up

A towering

Drop off point

During life's coaster ride

Of joy & setbacks


Hurriedly racing down

These roller coaster tracks

Are risk-taking passengers

Bypassing family

Friends & Even

Random acquaintances

Who can dismiss

The exhilarating feeling


Where velocity

Challenges their wits end

To appreciate

The Twists & Turns

For this exciting thrill


Forever demanding

Everyone's attention span

Who're riding

At high speeds

Creating a newly awakened

Adrenaline rush


Where everyone on board

Came to terms with

An adventurous sensation

As a fine line between

Possibly losing

Their present life's inception date


As this particular fate

Could come to pass

After all options

Were weighed out

Amongst every daring outcast

Before boarding

This eventful & mind blowing ride

It's compelling to know that

Life Is A Roller Coaster Of Compromises


© 2013 B-poet


Author's Note

B-poet
Just something a little different here. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

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It sure is...up one day and down another...enjoyed Brian as always...Rose:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


There are very few images that can reflect the human condition better than a roller coaster...it's a common image but you've put your own unique spin on it here and made it fresh...nicely done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I actually have a poem called Love is a Roller Coaster.. (also takes a lot of compromise). I enjoyed the direction you took with this Bri. Rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


Compromise can make some feel sick, but it's the only way to achieve balance...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Life can be a roller coaster, but that's what makes it fun! You just have to remember to hold on and keep you eyes open! Love this one! :) Julie

Posted 12 Years Ago


Never know what life is going to bring us or where it will take us....we have to hold on tight and wear that seatbelt! Very well written...the images were incredible! The adventure of life IS a roller coaster. Lydi**

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Dye
I'm a roller coaster junkie and enjoyed the ride you took me on. Life really is fully of ups and down, filled with compromise.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Life not quite what we expected. Great poem and fantastic title.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your poem is an adrenaline rush B...I love roller coasters, that you compared them to the compromises in life is genius, so true, it's enough to make you dizzy. Well said!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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