Directional Epiphanies

Figurative hunches

Have set sail

On the surface

Of oceanic currents

As waves of revelations

Are never cliche's

Since tomorrow's yesterday's

Will be forever gone

While blowing

Within the winds of beckoned

Directional Epiphanies

Author's Note

A new experimental theme for me. Giving it a try here. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by. And enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW.... this is really amazing... B... you are very talented... very well penned Bravo !! :)

[Rita L. Sev]

The answer is blowin' in the wind... a gentle, flowing sail in this, BP.

[kublakhan27]

I love the aquatic motif here...an imaginative and very relevant piece :)

[Emerald Seas]

This is actually quite a deep poem for its economy of words. Crafted with a great deal of thought, I feel a philosophical edge to this that makes me think in a number of directions. Thoroughly enjoyed the read. Well done B :)

[shallimarRose]

Hunches have set sail on oceanic currents? brilliant line.. Rose

[Pryde Foltz]

May our epiphanies always have direction---to a better shore. Great write, my friend.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"Since tomorrow's yesterday's

Will be forever gone

While blowing

Within the winds of beckoned

Directional Epiphanies"~ This to me is brilliantly crafted... The winds blow .. and "tomorrow's yesterdays" keep going regardless... I ponder on what shall be discovered, what epiphanies lie ahead...

Lovely experiment, B!... you have my mind reeling. ~xoxo~:)