A Luminary Poetic Vision - The Lost Lines (Version 3)

Orchestrating a clairvoyant & figurative

Broadening scheme thereby

Uplifting all fellow poetry lovers

Into believing anything in life is possible

Once they've chosen

To become visionaries

In their own written reich

Of grand personal significance

Will help crown them to be poetic kings

Within the public eye

By sparking enough

Attention towards

A well deserved nomination

For their induction

Into every esteemed library

Across a newly defined & revived

Poetic Renaissance Nation

Now in need of vibrant poetic pioneers

Whom will forever pledge allegiance

Towards fortifying

This special rare spectacle

In the making for years to come

Now deemed as

A Luminary Poetic Vision

Author's Note

Another version of the original. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)
The italicized text will take you on another poetic journey. If you look closely and read it twice. :)

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

There is a certain frenzy about this write that I definitely felt in the reading. I'm a big fan of the language and the "tone", as well as the concept of this one. I think the "flow" is impeded slightly by all of the italics, which made my mind sort of stop and start, not sure how I should read those particular words. Typically, when I see (or use) italics, it means listen up, read more carefully, this is important, but when there is too much, the mind doesn't seem to process as well. Anyway, just a stylistic thing. I liked the bones of the piece. :)