Anchored Prosperity

A joyful & personal

Voyaging ship's journey

Within the waters

Of an awakening bliss

Are apparent

As your looking over

The main deck's railing

Into the peaceful waters

Of serene imagery

Only to witness

A glistening image

In perfect harmony

With the captain

Of your newly regained spirit

As smooth sailing

Sets the pace for returning home

Before being

Docked at the bay

Of heartfelt intentions

Near a pier awaiting

The lowering of your

Anchored Prosperity

Author's Note

What can I say, I'm still in my experimental phase. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[s y e]

This is amazing BP, a lovely write. Keep experimenting, it's going well for you!

[Emerald Seas]

I can relate to this! Love the metaphor and imagery - a content and happy life. What we all dream of, yet may miss the mark sometimes. Love the poem, B!

[Rita L. Sev]

A good metaphor, with a feeling of contentment here. Well done, BP!

[Pryde Foltz]

Great philosophical metaphor. You can't set sail if your anchored,

[Anand Sehgal]

As your looking over

The main deck's railing

Into the peaceful waters

Of serene imagery

Only to witness


A glistening image

In perfect harmony

With the captain

Of your newly regained spirit

As smooth sailing




A marvelous self assured state :) I loved the composure portrayed :)

[kublakhan27]

I think of this as a counterpart to your epiphany piece...the aquatic imagery returns here but within a more peaceful context...well done :)