Live To Become A Figurative Piece Of Commemorative History

Have you made it

Into the record books

Where new ways

Of attainment

Will now grace

Inspiring amazement pages

Filled with images

Of you

Making a mark

On your nation's fabricated

Living Quilt Of Achievement

As decades

Continually pass us by

With ease

We all should personally

Live To Become A Figurative Piece Of Commemorative History

Author's Note

A new & meaningful theme. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Making a mark
On your nation's fabricated
Living Quilt Of Achievement

A visually and thematically strong metaphor. Great write.

[kublakhan27]

A unique theme, expressed wonderfully here. Love the first two lines, great work :)

[Kristin Lee]

ahhh...the title say's it all. I also love the zinger. "living quilt of achievement." Very poignant words indeed.

[SyberRose]

Well crafted piece Brian....thought provoking....Rose:)