The True Bearer Of Opportunistic Fruit

Rooted

With a prestigious purpose

In mind

One's quest to help

His fellow man

Should extend

As far as

His altruistic limb

Is concerned

In order to watch

A growing truth unfold

Everyone loves reaching

For the sake of

Shaping & Mending

Their respective livelihoods

As long as

They know & commend

The True Bearer Of Opportunistic Fruit

Author's Note

A new found theme I wanted to write about. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

You've always been a great poet, but your recent stuff has really been off the chart. I think the branching out into different themes and styles have done wonders for your poetic voice, and this one continues the trend :)

[Ohhhwillow]

I believe it is in our nature to strive - not only as a species, by individually we have the drive to better ourselves. Here you portray perfectly our desire to strive, to be the agents we can be. This flows well and I like the focus you put on certain words and phrases by giving them there own lines, good s**t right here! Well done

[Pryde Foltz]

Pay it forward; pay forward.

[Frieda P]

So in other words give without expecting anything in return for your kindness, just pay it forward and you'll reap the benefits. Well said Bpoet!

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

This is really interesting and a fun theme to play with. Keep up the good work my friend and DFTBA :)

[burnhouse]

I found this interesting and unique. :)