VERTIGO MASQUERADE (A KeelyJane & Bpoet Collaboration-Version 1)

A phantom of the vespers

    my vertigo psyche emerges
         unveiling the vagaries of my mood
Unsuited for a pedestal

     too proud to frolic equal ground
           please pardon my intrepid intrude 

 

Maybe once in a lifetime 
     will you encounter such a vixen
            a force that may or may not hurt you
I like the depths of my intentions 
      mysterious deep and wide  
             shallows not one of my virtues

 

Perhaps vicarious

      motive is always an intrigue

              ulterior or otherwise

In the foreshadow of my wayward presence

      there is reason

              the mask of all surprise

Author's Note

A divinely unique collaboration between KeelyJane & Bpoet. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[audrie]

A phantom of the vespers
my vertigo psyche emerges
unveiling the vagaries of my mood
Unsuited for a pedestal
too proud to frolic equal ground
please pardon my intrepid intrude - this was beautifully written - you possess a great talant

[Frieda P]

I agree, divinely unique, I read this one on Keely's page already, it's a great collaboration. :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Rich vocabulary in this piece - a great collaboration with a good flow.

[burnhouse]

Very specific use of words and I like how the text isn't looking simply monotonic. :)