VERTIGO MASQUERADE(A KeelyJane & Bpoet Collaboration-Version 2)

A phantom of the vespers

My vertigo psyche emerges

Unveiling the vagaries of my mood

Unsuited for a pedestal

Too proud to frolic equal ground

Please pardon my intrepid intrude

Possibly once in a lifetime

You'll encounter such a vixen

A friendly or poisonous force

I'm masked at a gala

By my own choice

I like the depths of my intentions

Mysteriously deep & wide

Are the shallows of my hidden virtues

Perhaps vicarious

Motive is always an intrigue

Ulterior or Otherwise

In the foreshadow of my wayward presence

There is reason

The mask of all surprised suspicions

Relating to the identity

Of me

The masked vixen of a virtuous conspiracy

Author's Note

A second version from the original (KeelyJane & Bpoet collaboration). All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :) Bpoet's verse is italicized, KeelyJane's is not.

Reviews

[audrie]

"In the forshadow of my wayward presence there is reason
the mask of all surprised suspicions relating to the identity of me
the mashed vixen of a vicarious conspiracy"
Loved! this expression

[Pryde Foltz]

The facades intended and not-so. Great write, you two.

[burnhouse]

Nice and unique poem. As I said, love the words.