A Fulfilling Hunger

Within the confides

Of our deepest desires

Lies

An insatiable craving

Meant to satisfy

A Fulfilling Hunger

After we've experienced

Life's unpredictable outcomes

We often fall short

Of our own expectations

In the long run

An intrigued personal revelation

Will only calm

Our lost sense of spiritual nourishment

As the sun sets

In retrospect

Of our wavered failure's

We now get a chance

Too embrace a new dawn

With dignified character

Author's Note

A creative new theme. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[audrie]

This speaks to everyone having their own hunger and their own experiences. I always liked the idea of a new day to create a new character - nice read

[AleyshaRosa]

The way I see it, we are always reaching for perfection. It's as if no matter what we have, we always want more... Something we don't have which spins us in a constant chase, like a dog chasing its own tail.

I really enjoyed this poem, thanks for sharing

Koodoos

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This gets readers thinking.

[Pryde Foltz]

A very zenful write. It was exactly what I needed.

[Jack...]

I suppose we never really see ourselves as others do...that can be a good thing or that can be a bad thing...

Very creative and nicely done my friend.

[kublakhan27]

We can be our own biggest fans or our own most ruthless critics. Thoughtful and well-written...well done B :)

[annabellee]

Very good poem, indeed. you know what you're doing ...
thanks for sharing :)

[MsJewel]

A very thought provoking write my friend. I like this one very much! Your talent never ceases to amaze me!

:) Julie

[Trace]

I figure we never know what we will find to enhance our chances of fulfilling expectations.
but I know that I enjoyed reading how you put it here. Trace

[SyberRose]

Enjoyed very much Brian...nicely done as always...Rose