Gratefulness At Its Best (Haiku)

Enjoy what you have

The sun rises and sunsets

Now on your behalf.

Author's Note

Just a inspirational senryu I wanted to put together. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[audrie]

It's like each day has come especially for each person - nice

[AleyshaRosa]

Simple. Sweet. Direct. Not even the best arguer in town could debate the words of your poem
Much enjoyed =]

Koodoos

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting senryu.

[annabellee]

Short but yet everything is said with these few words. Good job :)

[kublakhan27]

Indeed a very inspirational statement. Like any great senryu, it has a kind of twist at the end, and I love the last line. Nicely done :)

[MsJewel]

So true my friend! Beautiful and inspirational - I enjoyed this one very much!

:) Julie

[Jack...]

Each day is here for us to create. Nicely done my friend.

[Anand Sehgal]

terse and beautiful. good write BP

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes it does... a great piece of "carpe diem" here, BP!