A Warm Heart Fueled By A Cold Soul (Version 3)

One's best intentions

Were masked by

A staring revelation

Dwelling within

Weary eyes

Reveled by veracious sacrifice's

After a pallbearers image

Had chosen to uphold

The ambivalence between

A Warm Heart Fueled By A Cold Soul

Author's Note

A third version of the original. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[audrie]

This reminds me of someone who is conflicted with caring about things yet not giving a s**t about things at the same time - it seems like with a cold soul it would mean that all other feelings would be mute. thanks for the read

[B-poet]

Thanks Audrie, glad you enjoyed this piece, I had much fun creating the different versions of it.

[Corset]

there are times when we can only feel our way through something, based on the imput that the soul is recieving, and if there are many points from which the information is filtering in from it is easy to confuse all those signals as from the same source, the only thing one can do is close your eyes and remember who you believe that person to be...imho, this was such a wonderful write.

[BlackRose]

Wow, great piece. Strong and true in some way. Love is one thing but if ones not feeling it, the absolute true love from the other, then it's never going to last.

[Pryde Foltz]

The ambivalence between
A Warm Heart Fueled By A Cold Soul

Some powerful thoughts here. True enough, it is not enough to be loving one must also seek to do the right thing.

[Frieda P]

Whoa, I don't know how many ways you can twist this theme, but you're on a roll here, this is the best one thus far...gobstopped!

[Ruth]

Damn, not often do I get truly blown away...but this? Sensational...so many thoughts and yet I can't ground them, superb work, truly! x