Our Advised Standoff

We need to

Obliterate all discrepancies

Which tarnish our giving hearts

As human beings

Since it's an uphill battle

Too master

Our freewill

In the midst of true temptation

We'll face

A familiar foe

Until the end

No one

We'll ever know

How a truce

Within us

Between Good & Evil

Had been sought after

The Final Act of

Our Advised Standoff

Author's Note

Just a creative new write I was dabbling with. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

To master
Our freewill
In the midst of true temptation

Some profound verse.

[Frieda P]

There will always be that fight within humans beings, who wins always depends on so many variables. Always an upbeat read from your pen Bpoet.

Think that should be 'to master'

[Corset]

now see this makes me think of the yin and yang, two parts , one white and one black, both containing a small portion of possibility in each one to be like the other, but they are not separate, they connect and support each other as balance, if there was not light there could not be shadow, there would be no reason for free will or evolution, or even for conciousness, or even humanity for that matter, if there was not a healthy balance between the two. If you completely obliterate the good there will be absolutely no purpose for evil, and vice versa, the world as a matrix would simply cease to exist altogether because there would be no conciousness of the existance of the other. just my humble musings.