A Warm Heart Fueled By A Cold Soul (Version 4)

One's best intentions

Were masked by

A staring revelation

Dwelling within

Weary eyes

Reveled by undaunted sacrifice's

After an undertaker's image

Had chosen to uphold

The gratifying ambivalence of

A Warm Heart Fueled By A Cold Soul

Author's Note

A fourth version of the original. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

short and sweet...best intentions end up in a casket of misdirected sacrifice...
and nobody stands at the grave and remembers.

[ms. barrie]

I'm terribly sorry for not visiting your writes more often...
That said:

This is simply incredible! Such few words speaking volumes of
Compelling imagery depicting of one being disillusioned by
Their love. This is a very biting, gripping poem...

Thank you for sharing! :)