A Forgotten Physical Presence

Life seemed

To pass by this man

Who tried fitting in

As an outcast

With the laws of the land

Only to have

Society's conformity rug

Eventually pulled

Right out from under him

What else could he do

Since no one really had a clue

Why he existed

With such a pure heart of graciousness

It's a shame

These type of people in life

Are often labeled as

A Forgotten Physical Presence

Author's Note

Just a quick creative write I wanted to put together. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[MsJewel]

A sad tale, but true for many. I enjoyed this one very much.

:) Julie

[Rita L. Sev]

Conform, and disappear in one way... Don't conform, and disappear in a different way. Well done, BP.

[Pryde Foltz]

What else could he do
Since no one really had a clue
Why he existed
With such a pure heart of graciousness

It is a mystery. Excellent work, Bpoet.

[Frieda P]

The squeaky wheel and all that jazz, those kind of heart do seem to play second fiddle to all those blaring trumpet players, like how you state a POV here.

Tripped over 'To passed by this man' to have passed or just pass would work better I think. :-) Nice work here Bpoet.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

pure hearts? graciousness?

how unfortunate those with these qualities not only go unnoticed, but they do seem outcasts in society today...they don't fit in, they get stomped on..and eventually disappear...but some notice, they do.