An Unfolding Eternity (Original)

The fate of

One spirited soul

Left a lasting mark

Symbolically towards

Spiritual preservation

Within a dominion

Where darkness

Perpetually ruled

Its daylight hours

Were forever consumed by

An Unfolding Eternity

Author's Note

Just a short creative write I wanted to put together. All reviews welcome. Thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Quite a thought provoking little gem my friend. Your talent never ceases to amaze me!

:) Julie

[kublakhan27]

Daylight's fight to kick back the darkness is never-ending, but a fight well worth fighting, especially if you're like me haha As always, you manage to pack a great deal of profundity into short succinct pieces...nicely done :)

[Frieda P]

Deep and profound, I want to peek into your head one day and see if you ever have a regular thought like the rest of us commoners. ;-)

[K.N. Lorenzen]

Thought-provoking, philosophical piece.
well-penned, Bpoet!

K.

[Jack...]

Eternity does continue to unfold each moment that we lean into that light. For soon enough and without warning the dark will occupy the linen closet and at that point all hope is lost...left unfolded.

Very cool little write.