The Next Loving Gardner (Short Version)

Men should treat women

Like lovely flowers

Who favor showers

Of affection

As often as possible

Neglecting their fragile needs

Could turn your relationship

Into a lost perennial mystery

So giving light emotionally

In the form of a compliment

To their radiant beauty

Could only prevent

A passionate-rooted escape

From happening & before seeing

Your womanly rose petals

Leaving you all alone

To be forgotten for

The Next Loving Gardner

Reviews

[Jack...]

Indeed my friend, your words speak truth. And there always is a "next loving gardner" ready to step in and tend to the beauty you neglect. All it takes is a little tender lovng care and that gorgoeus bloom can be your forever. Very nicely penned my friend. And they call me the romantic poet. :)

[Corset]

I was going to say something crass about Hoes,(lol and every garden having one) but this was so sweet I opted for "hell yes" instead, tender loving care, talk to and tend with tender loving care.

[Pryde Foltz]

Your womanly rose petals
Leaving you all alone
To be forgotten for
The Next Loving Gardner

Absolutely, Bpoet. A relationship is a garden, plant, seed and weed with care.

[MsJewel]

This is lovely!

:) Julie

[Melobldnfr]

Definitely a point you have here.

[kublakhan27]

An interesting read...I'm not quite sure how I should interpret it haha There is romance and devotion in there of course, but I'm also tempted to read this as a wry poke at a woman who wants it all and wants it now haha Or perhaps she's simply insecure and needs that constant affirmation of her beauty. Leave it to me to read it that way though...great work as always :)