Disheartening Associations

Disheartening Associations

A Poem by B-poet

It's unfortunate

Being stabbed in the back

By a fellow acquaintance


In remembrance

Of a false friendship

Turned opportunistic


Forever ruins

A valued perception

Of brethren companionship

Within ourselves

Paints

An unlikely portrait


Where trust issues

Are routinely vulnerable due to

The provocation of

Disheartening Associations


© 2014 B-poet


Author's Note

B-poet
A creative write, I was brainstorming with. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

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Oh, the number of times...
Proceed with caution, this is how I approach new friendships.
Good write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Where trust issues
Are routinely vulnerable due to
The provocation of
Disheartening Associations

I suppose when ego meets ego always there are two losers. Great write, Bpoet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


i am dealing with something so similar right now...had an old friend, very close....he did this to me years ago...then apologized in order to restore the trust and friendship....and bingo...did it again....and now is trying to act like we are still best friends....third time is not the charm, trust-wise...

Posted 11 Years Ago


It is disheartening, both the back stabbing and then the consequence of not trusting again... we live in a self centered, fokd up world... but the worst is the back stabbing I think... ~~redzone

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your creativity shines in this wonderful little gem.

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


Trust is so easy to break and such a fragile thing...an incredibly important thing, once broken, well...you voiced it perfectly x

Posted 11 Years Ago


A sadly relevant piece as it pertains to human nature, expressed brilliantly here...nicely done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very profound write, that is very relatable. Incredible use
Of language weaved throughout this write, depicting one
Allowing one or being around those who do indeed
Render us feeling disheartened. Perfectly worded...
With with grace. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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