Places Of Seasonal Sorrow (Version 3)

Dark places truly exist

As feared dream's of harsh sufferance

Push every dear heart & spirit

To the brink

Where an edgy emotional imbalance

Demands renewed strength 

Taking our humane coping level's

To greater heights

On this grand stage

We call life

Encompasses the entire

Playing field of our lives

With susceptible & adverse

Dream yards of probable cause

Complying with the unpredictable nature

Of our desired tomorrow's

After experiencing

Places Of Seasonal Sorrow

Author's Note

A third and final version of the original. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

seasonal sorrow, dark places, things that could make us recede into black dreams...could make us go off the deep end so easily...yet emotional strength is so important to keep us balanced, and looking toward tomorrow...

life is a grand stage...and sometimes we will get good reviews and sometimes bad, but we must take it all in stride.

[Matching Socks]

Dark places truly exist...
My heart has it's own seasons but the weather patterns are unpredictable. Hmm. Therefore not patterns. :)
Good write.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Very emotional, and intense, expressive and vividly described. As personal as it is, it is very real and relatable.