Only Needs To Appear When Needed

God comes into play

When what you

Need to happen

In a timely manner

Corresponds with a myth

Nicknamed synchronicity

If not for panic & anxiety though

Why else

Would this titled phrase

Bear such meaningful weight

During life itself

As personal echos

For our forecast-ed demand's

Are clearly heard

From the start

Of pacified internal pleading

This verbal antidote

Amidst proverbial chaos

Will never sugarcoat

A geniune character's

Relief effort's style

Towards honing in on what

Only Needs To Appear When Needed

Author's Note

This is an experimental topic I wanted to try out & put together. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

You're writing is always complex with many layers to peel back Bpoet....I'm not sure if it's timing or luck, but sometimes we do win. I could read this a few more times and still uncover more synchronicity within your poetry.

[kublakhan27]

Hard not to think of the Stones song here: you can't always get what you want, but if you try sometimes, you get what you need...the first stanza is beautifully-expressed, as is the final one...all in between seems to express a little more ambivalence in relation to the theme, as we're sometimes left to wonder why we must endure chaos in order to receive divine relief...still I thought this was an uplifting and optimistic piece above all...well done B :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Timing does indeed seem to be everything... A good thought here, BP.

[Cody Williams]

Interesting write Bepoet. Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have felt this many times...that timing is everything....i found it being poor...i come upon some unexpected money, and then something goes wrong with the car...stuff like that...and i could complain that i can't get ahead, but instead i look at it as someone is watching over me, and made sure i could take care of what i needed to...

i really like the wording of this...so insightful.

jacob

[Matching Socks]

Exactly! I only pray to god when I need something.
And then so help me...