Societal Branding (Original)

Making it

Through a maze

Of motorized commerce

Hurts the worst

When social labels

Coerce a decaying effect

Within our intellectual mindset

Where self reins supreme

Societal Branding

Loves to impose

It's influence

On our freewill

With only one goal in mind

Entertain the fine idea

Of ambiguity

Until most of us

Fall into ruin

After becoming victim's

To the hands of wasted time

Author's Note

This is the original version. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

I like both versions. :)

[Ruth]

Labels and labels and the illusion of time and what we should do with it and how we should be...suffocating at times! Brilliant work x