The Illuminated Light Of Redemption

Glaring

Within the sky's ending times

Remains

The Illuminated Light Of Redemption

Flaring only to disperse

Humanities living shadow

Vows to preserve

A darkened desolation

In today's cold world

Caring candle's

Of forgotten sentiments

Must stay lit

For the sake of incurable souls

Who need to feel the warmth

Of this redeeming flame's influence

Author's Note

A creative expressive write I wanted to try out. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

It is enjoyable; I always enjoy poems and stories that offer redemption and hope, and you have a unique take on the idea of redemption.

[kublakhan27]

I think many of us look to the sky as a source of infinity...the notion of it as a provider of 'ending times' is unique and mysterious, yet it make perfect sense at the same time, since it's also a symbol of redemption...you never fail to offer unique insights, and even though you often begin with despair, you always seem to find a way over to hope's end of the spectrum by the end...fine work as always B :)