Calmed Souls Of Elegance

Calmed Souls Of Elegance

A Poem by B-poet

Vigils of appreciation

Embrace the rekindling

Of a congregation's vision

Comprised with

Many believers

Seated with handled

Candle flames

Ignited vast illuminated

Serenity claim's

Throughout a gracious chapel's

Faith-based services

Compliance had definitely

Been in attendance

As divinity choose

To unmasked

Every communicable sin

Amongst an eyeful of

Calmed Souls Of Elegance

Dignitary resolve

Who were In awe

For what was yet come

After their holy initiation

Had finally begun

© 2014 B-poet


Author's Note

B-poet
A befitting religious type of write I wanted to try out. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

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I like this entire poem but the last part is fascinating where you address the unmasking of every sin. Are we talking about judgment day here?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Strongly worded, nicely penned, and flowed very nicely - Well done!

Very unique you chose to place in bold "Calmed Souls Of Elegance" within the poem itself - nice touch :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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