The Hidden Valley Of Expiration

If degeneration

Is the prognosis

After birth

Then a lifetime

Must be worth

Priceless seconds

Where witnessed

Sessions of societal recollection's

Are seen as

Forks in the road

Needed to solve accusations

Started from human actions

They're forever fraction-ed

As relative drawbacks

Looked for humanities whereabouts

Secretly they posed & posted themselves

On social media posters

Depicting fool's wealth

As a token of social extravagance

Only represents a small gist

For what really goes on within

The Hidden Valley Of Expiration

Author's Note

Just an expressive creative write I threw together. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[jennifer little]

nice write keep up the good work had nice flow to it and nice wording

[Pryde Foltz]

If degeneration
Is the prognosis
After birth
Then a lifetime
Must be worth
Priceless seconds

Some definite food for thought here for the reader. Wonderful write.

[Eliza Mae]

I agree with Jennie, this poem is wonderfully worded! The flow is so flawless, you never lost me along the way.. I can't wait for more :)

Keep it up!

[Jennie Baron]

It's wonderfully worded and the imagery is apt. I realize your style is to write in sentence fragments and snippets, so it loses me at times, but I enjoyed this poem very much and truly liked a couple of parts:
"If degeneration/Is the prognosis/After birth/Then a lifetime/Must be worth/Priceless seconds";
"Secretly they posed & posted themselves/On social media poster's [posters?] /Depicting fool's wealth/As a token of social extravagance".