Her Undeniable & Admired Presence

The sight of her nakedness

Healed & Cleansed

The loving hearts of most men

In more ways than one

They'd never imagine

It'd only happen

Once in a lifetime

Where her figured appeal

Remained worthy

Throughout her time

Monogamy

Had momentously birthed

A committed art form

Where cordial minds

Devoted to relational men

Hoped a portrayal of genuine kinship

Could certainly exist

One day as

Her Undeniable & Admired Presence

Author's Note

A sentimental theme I was working on. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I hear the admiration for this woman is clear and shows through the whole poem.

[Dez H.]

Yo Gutta this right here...boy this right here. Epic thats all I can say. Good s**t B.
-007

[Ruth]

Really warming read...powerfully visual, I can see the vision in your writing, that is why I enjoy reading you so much xo

[Jennie Baron]

Everything is great about this poem except the use of "heart's" rather than the plural "hearts"... The healing and cleansing part is very creative and definite food for thought.

[MsJewel]

I enjoy this sentimental side of you. Intelligent and well written - it is always a pleasure to read you!

:) Julie

[Corset]

Cheers to sentimental themes as they do you a wonderful justice. Healed and cleansed, and to those who man the medicine machines, a toast to the undeniable presences that gift our lives with genuine kinship.