Meaningful Dawned Tomorrow's (Version 2)

Ceremonial rays of sunshine

Vividly interplays as a

Meaningful cloudscapes monologue 

Pulsated within the hearts of

Beloved observers

Who pictured jubilation

Within favored  

Scenic signs

Of personal revelation's

A balcony style view

Unveiled written clues

Where a lasting rainbow's

Gleeful message mirrored

In the air

 Dawned fluorescent flares

From Tomorrow's graced skyline

By far

Calligraphic cumulus clouds

Discovered telepathic

Soliloquies befittingly

Spelled aloud

Profound Vows

Would later reveal

What's yet to come

From everyone's

Unbridled future's past

Author's Note

Version 2 of the original

Reviews

[ANTO]

I was transported to Stonehenge on a summer solstice with a fantastic druid ceremony being performed while reading this B.Poet - the unbridled past becoming the future (rise of the druids again) as organized Western religion suffers schizm upon schizm.
Thanks

[Jennie Baron]

You paint a complex but beautiful metaphoric picture of the dawn and the hope that arises each new day. Excellent work indeed!