The Cemetery Of Past Lives Saga (Pentameter Version – Part 1)

Epitaphs and tombstones have made room for '

What lies six feet beneath reality

Will never awaken grief amongst the

Minds of giving strangers who chose to see

Sympathy instead of reprieve were in

A state of disbelief after reading

The obituary's of a candid

Wife who made it in The Cemetery

Of Past Lives after being a lifelong
Temptress in disguise lead many lives with

Multiple personalities towards men

With sufficed denials of their very own

Presence as fools casting themselves for their

Impending doom at hand; which was self destruction

Author's Note

It's ten syllables each line, a new themed poetic series. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

You've created a somber, gloomy, ghostly atmosphere very well with your words. Interesting poem because I was left pondering who or what the temptress was, and there are multiple interpretations. Great write!

[Eagergreen]

I liked this though it was sort of swaying at first like a tree does on a gusty day then it sort of caught the tree on fire which was intresting combo in my mind