You know I second the comment about your diction and command of language, and I like the theme here and the sensuality. I'm intrigued because it suggests love as well as obsession. One of my favorite poems of your so far.
very intriguing, achingly, sensual write...B-Poet...
your command of both language and compelling
imagery, not to mention dictation is always
astounding! I look forward to visiting more of your
writes once I can figure out wicked...
thank you for sharing (:
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