Candle-Blowers (Di-Meter Version 2)

Candle-Blowers (Di-Meter Version 2)

A Poem by B-poet

Our living lights

Are the eyes of

A future now

Held high to fly

Should be set free

Like caged dreams seen

Blowing in the

Wind's trivial

Reality

A flaring wick's

Melting candle

Wax for our souls

Must make it past

An on-going

Plethora of

Well-wishers now

Willing to be

Posers waiting

In a welcomed

Covetous line

Of classless masses

Wanting to grasp

Beloved perils 

Blown from vagrant

Candle-Blowers


© 2019 B-poet


Author's Note

B-poet
Version 2 of the the original. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

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Riveting! You had me from your first stanza... marvelous phrasing and imagery, and splendid metaphor.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on February 27, 2015
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Indianapolis, IN



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