Probable Future Traffic (Di-Meter Version)

Probable Future Traffic (Di-Meter Version)

A Poem by B-poet

If yesterday's

Destination

Was tomorrow

Then we've arrived

Near a stoplight's

Flashing green plight

Of ignited

Surrealism

That's making waves

To establish

Personified

Truths within each

Person's wishful

Unseen speed from

Probable lane's

Future Traffic

© 2017 B-poet


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B-poet
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hmmmmmmm, this one is a bit of a brain teaser, if it were so we would already know what tomorrow brings, I think I like the order of things. Sometimes not knowing is better, then we can just be happy with today.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Anticipating things that will bring us to a stop, and pacing that will come from the speed of our desire. You've done a great job delivering your point within this di-meter

Posted 10 Years Ago


The symbolism of the stoplight is brilliant. We're always stuck between the past and the future, aren't we? Well put!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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