Withered Impressions (Trimeter Version)

Conception's eventful

Chance spiraled emergence

Into an action plan

So a sense of ourselves

Could come to pass on all

Forgotten unseen truths

In the form of fruitful

Gifts by sincerity's

Giving wish to exalt

The sacredness of our

Last inevitably

Seen Withered Impressions

Author's Note

A creative new theme I was working on. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[~]

This does read as a perpetual cause and effect. There are many stages that we go through till the last impression. But, I would dare to say, that we don't have to be withered. we can always be the reflection of our love for others, in its most beautiful form. :D

[Jennie Baron]

To me, this is a summary of all the stages of life: the possibilities of each life conceived and born; the prime of life, where we work, love and give gifts to others; and the end of life where we consider the legacy we're leaving behind. Brief but profound!

[Corset]

your writes are always so intelligently written that the meaning is often obscured, we have to work at understanding, which means rereading many times, once we have our impression down then it is often "ahhhh' and a smile.

[613]

This was so great! I'm glad you sent this to me to read. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

- Brittney