Feeling Like A Feather In The Wind (Tri-Meter Version)

Feeling Like A Feather

In The Wind innocence

Had chosen to lay it's

Dear hand of influence

On the appearance of

Each burdensome shoulder's

Essence now by far the

Power vested in a

Loving heart's reach only

Can befittingly teach

Compassion to the like's

Of all maligned spirit's

Who remain to stay on

The path of admired

Differences leading

To forgiveness within

A redeemable age

Between men and women

Genuinely forthright

Correspondence bridges

Eccentricity gaps

From the likes of beguiled

Individual world's

Mirrored with vanities

Fueled by infinitely

Curious conflicts of

Interests among their peers

Author's Note

I know it's been awhile but it's nice to be back with some new stuff. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by & enjoy.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

this piece has a voice of forgiveness

[Jennie Baron]

Very, very nice, and clever indeed, as Pryde said. You constantly amaze me with your articulate words and the artful way in which they're put together. So glad to read your writing again!

[Pryde Foltz]

A clever and thoughtful piece, B-poet. Nice to read your words again:)

[Corset]

Being able to admire ones differences and even relish in the individuality of them is a wonderful thing. Nicely done :) I enjoyed reading this