Fantasy's Blinding Lies (Trimeter Version)

Devoted emotions
From the vainness tree of

Tempted awakenings

Speared a controversy

Passionately beyond

Witnessed extremes had been

An undying beauty's

Silhouette did set up

A contemporary

Man's mind into a trance

Like state purposely

Mistaking deception's

Vixen poison ivy

With the nature of his

Caring and radiant

Wife's vanity bearing

Clear shields of trustworthy

Complexities from his

Fantasy's Blinding Lies

Author's Note

It's been a minute, but here's a new creative theme I wanted to share. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Dez H.]

Gutta B another interestin person who keeps me wanting more words of wisdom. U never disappoints when I read ur works. Good piece pimpn.

[Jennie Baron]

Another great write and I don't know what I can add to the previous reviews, but I really enjoyed it. An insightful portrayal of how fantasy deceives us. So often, even if your fantasy comes true, the reality of it is disappointing.

[ms. barrie]

fantastic write indeed...can't help but echo everyone else's
sentiments. very impressive play on words...quite original...
you weaved within this ink mystical cynicism that truly
holds one captive. I applause your talent...you never fail
to amaze us all. I look forward to visiting your art again
soon (: ~ barrie

[Bacchus]

brings me back to eden...
the tree- the controversy set up
and Adam is swayed by the woman to partake.

if the fantasy of it all could be delightful...
but it ruins everything
- his eyes are open in the end-
to destruction
but first blinded that fantasy is where it is at-

[Pryde Foltz]

Desire is link to the ego and it is linked to evolution and the suffering it can inspire linked to awakening, all serves the Tao. Fantastic write, B-Poet:)