A Deadening Cycle Of Relived Dramatizations

How long
Has it been
Since a chosen
Breakthrough appeared
To be free from
Our repetitive and shackled
Frame of mind

Who never really knew
It clearly grew
Into a reality
Without key illustration's
Of gleeful moments
Pictured as smiling faces
Branded with self-resolve

Had now evolved
Into an illusive
Immunity token
Thrown towards
Our crying altar's
Peaceful call
For a changing chance
At ending
Our personal lives saga from
A Deadening Cycle Of Relived Dramatizations

Author's Note

A new write, I'm was working on. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

What Pryde said. Our situation won't change until our thoughts do.

When I read your poems I hear the beautiful sound of the words before looking for any theme. Your word choices and their flow, as always, are impressive.

[Pryde Foltz]

In order to change one's karma ... the thoughts must be changed first. We do have a way of reliving those to. Your writes really are brilliant:)