What We All Should Have In Common Under The Sun's Heavenly Rays (Tetrameter Version)

The desire to nourish and

Uplift our kinship strengthens a

Inspirational gift diverse

Cultures often thirst to embrace

When social disgrace is traced near a place

Where oppressed shadows lie awake

Daytime reflects affinity

For why unity depicts loved

Worldly communities across

The globe form one viewed bloodline for

What We All Should Have In Common

Under The Sun's Heavenly Rays

Author's Note

An inspirational gem I was working on. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[HeartBreakHotel]

Under the Suns heavenly rays , nice !! I love it . I can feel the Rays actually beeming

[Philip Muls]

There is so much more that connects us than that what separates us, right? Yet we do not see it that way. Our ego's like to stand out from the others.

I like how to take a stand here and say what should unite us.

[1VJ]

Inspirational and well written, if only everyone heeded this astutely poetic message.

[Dez H.]

Gudda B u are without a doubt one of the best friends and poets I've ever known and read. Keep it up pimpn and holla at ya brother soon.

[Pryde Foltz]

Indeed we should. Inspiration write, B-poet:):):)

[Jennie Baron]

A message of unity is always appreciated in this world. We have to be reminded that we are all one. And you have expressed that so astutely. Thanks for sharing!

[Nisreen]

I really like it

And i agree with your message here !!