Loving Transformation (Intended Version)

Shades and Degrees of ourselves

Reflect a genuineness

Conspicuously dreamy

Yet awaiting quietly

For anyone else’s

Possessiveness to give away

Shared gifts of self lovingness

Affectionately lying dormant

Within our own minds

And hearts lies a power

Far greater than any compliment

Manifested as a gesture

From friends or strangers

Could ever appease

The ego’s undying nature  

To bloom from hubris seeds

Cleverly embodied as

One’s very own

Loving Transformation

Author's Note

A second version of the original. All reviews welcome. :)