The Illuminated Light Of Redemption (Revised Version)

Glaring

Within the sky's ending times

Remains

The Illuminated Light Of Redemption

Flaring only to disperse

Humanities living shadow

Vows to preserve

 

A darkened desolation

Where caring candle's

Of forgotten sentiments

Must remain lit

For the sake of incurable souls

Who need to feel the warmth

Of this redeeming flame's influence

 

Author's Note

Revision is always saving the best for last when it comes to true readers. All reviews welcome, enjoy.