A VENUSUVIANN WINTER...

mental prose

A...Venusuvian Winter…

…Shards of yellow crystals

allows 3-D visuals…to be seen is…

Memories of lost abandonment….

They

…give meaning to the walk

///The gate that floats a vessel///

… Spiced up Cognac…

…Mingles with the spike of a Mickey…

The

…conflicting thoughts of intrusions…

..Of..

…Past inflictions…. Release paranoid delusions..

….loneliness…is a thing of deep space 9…

// Standing here….

***With a foot as big a Orion’s belt ***

…the elevated swish …the sounds …the sigh

.. Of..

///The non- existent criminal….Freezes ///

……….Membranes to deliver to Pluto…

..Spring time…

..Change the axis to a rational configuration….

…Disaster…

//Affliction of tender conduits//

..As Hollow as Jupiter’s massive insides ..

…Down goes the next wave~~~~~~~~~~~

… … … ..The numbness welcomed……

…..The incoherence of planetary movement…

///Winter does not last forever///

…Where the movement is tangible…

***Absolute***

And then

~~~There is the Venusuvian Winter~~~

///..Rigged..///..Unrelenting ..///

///…Devoid…of reason…///

…Thick Glaciers…

///Frost bitten barren….

//Mentally closed…..

~~Sitting at the bar

~~Awaiting a 3finger neat…

~~Watching passersby…

…Winter on a Stool…

BABy©2010

Reviews

[POETIC VIXEN]

i feel the freeze

[MS. BABy]

Thank u Raven, I am honored to have added that ever so wanted extra to place you at point mellow...smile

[MS. BABy]

EMF...AWWW SHUCKSSSS....smile, thank u so much you too are one of my most favorites.

[MS. BABy]

I thought the spice cognac might have appealed to my male readers, thank u so much for your encouragement

[MS. BABy]

thank u Terri....I wrote it thinking of those who can't move past hurt and wrong, mainly from that of a woman

[Raven Starhawk]

This has spice to it and I like spice. Just my type of poem to end the day with!

[EMF]

Your work is infectious, spreading like a virus through my brain. Stunning and breathtaking.

[Manpreet]

Lovely write !!I loved the frost, the spiced cognac and of course shards of yellow crystals. Great work!!

[Teri B]

There's a bleakness about this...

[MS. BABy]

I know they took away my frostbitten flower, Ishall find and repost the photo, thanks Styxx