Will You Accept Me As I Am?

Imploring....

The flaw of imperfection runs deep

Its gaping wound oozing reminders

of yesterday...

 

I am a woman

Nothing more

nothing less

Will you accept me as I am?

 

I speak quickly....

I feel all the time

I AM HORMONAL

How does this revelation rub you?

 

 

Loving you has never been the problem

Keeping you always have

Satisfying your desires was never the chore

Keeping you from straying...

 

I shall never accept less

Never shall I accept less

I will rant and rave

Because simply put....I am a woman in love.....

 

Will you accept me as I am?

 

Suspicious

Insecure

Happy

Sad....self-indulgent

 

Loving...

Loving....

Loving.....

 

WILL YOU ACCEPT ME AS I AM?

 

I can only pray you will

Let the congregation say

Amen

 

The elimination of sin

A calamitious Sin of excess need and desire

There exist too much need inside of me for you

 

I have to know that no one

And nothing takes away anything from me

Captivate me inside of

A fradulent Palatial Garden of Eden 

 

Will you accept me as I am?

 

Help me!

Please help me cure my pains

Don't make me face myself

 

Kiss me in the morning

Touch me with your warming

Graze.....

 

Can you accept me as I am?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BABy(c)2011

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

thank u for ur review so very much

[Gomer LePoet]

All of us come with flaws and failures. I believe most of us accept those with this one caveat, we must admit to our shortcomings and always strive to make ourselves better in the eyes of the true master, who ever that is in each of our hearts.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

It's nice to be accepted as you are and not having to change for anyone. Very nice write.

[rt farris]

a creative form for a poem filled with deep yearning. it engaged me. thanks.

[Gilbert Saint]

I like this, but the pictures are sort of out of place, especially the open hands, the last one though, hit the nail on the head. Like the description, true it is, raving and whatever, that's what poetry is all about, truth put in an enjoyable manner.

[POETIC VIXEN]

when u write.....all things. move....I breathed.

[Manpreet]

Woman in love is a great subject to write/paint or create music. You have captured it all in your write. It was lovely reading it.

[Amila Jay]

Splendid:)

[biggerthenu]

i love how pieced this together the true essence of a woman and how a true man that's meant for he will stand loved it

[November Gold]

once again, i read you and see me, and my thoughts and feelings. I know so well where you are in this. Never accept less or allow anyone else to make us less to fit their need. You are a beautiful soul :)